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Thursday, March 10, 2011

Chapter 13

Before we start I want to say I'm sorry it took so long...I had this big report to turn in. I'd like to thank all those who commented. I just found out that I have to verify your comments so they should actually start showing up now! ;)
This Chapter will be told from Tresing's point of view.
Geonna: Is that your old wife?
I shook my head.  I wasn't lying. My old wife had no idea where I was. Anyway this woman was so unlike Cindy.  Her name is Donna, and she livea in this nice house across town...what was she doing here?
Tresing: Hi Donna.
Donna: Hi Tresing. And you must be Geonna... 
Geonna: Pleased to meet you.
Tresing: What are you doing here?
Donna: Your neighbor called me up.  They knew I had met you, when you first came. Anyway, they said Jesus was screaming his head off.  I ran inside, your door was unlocked by the way, and there she was scaring the poor boy with a flashlight.  She would shine it up to her face, turn the rest of the lights off and tell Jesus stories he was way too young for!  I sent her away and didn't even pay her.  Then I fed poor Jesus and convinced him that everyone of those stories weren't real..
Tresing: Here have the babysitter's pay.  Thank you so much!
Geonna: Poor Jesus...We won't ever call her again!
Donna: I should think not. But since this is over, I would really like to talk to Geonna, if Tresing wants to see Jesus.
I ran inside. I didn't even care  what those girls were going to talk about.
Tresing: Jesus!
Jesus Daddy!
Tresing: I'm so sorry I didn't relize she was such a monster!
I played with him all day. He told me that the babysitter didn't feed him, or play with, or even put him to bed.  He said that Donna was like "a soupa haro" because she "saved da day"
Donna decided to stay the night so I had to sleep in Geonna's bed. Not that I really cared
Not one bit. ;D
I still wanted to know why she thought Donna was Cindy...

1 comment:

  1. In case anyone doesn't get it the babysitter told Jesus scary stories...

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