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Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Chapter 12

This chapter will be told from Tresing's Point of View
I'm sorry the last chapter was so short.  I hope this chapter is much longer!  Also please vote on the poll!
In the last chapter, Tresing realized he was late for his date.
Ok, now for the story to start:
I couldn't believe I was late!
I could!
Shhh  I changed into my suit and slacks, and rushed out door.
I found her in the park and I saw her before she saw me.
Boy, she is pretty. 
I walked up her. Relax, I told myself. I loosened up. Smiled. Geonna visibly relaxed, too.  Good, good.  Just...just be normal.  Say hi, then tell her what's going on...but not ALL of it, at least not yet.
Tresing: You look great!
Geonna: You look nice, too.
Tresing: Um...hello...So I have a few things planned...but first dinner?
Geonna: I'm at your leisure.
We were sitting in the taxi, and Geonna put her hand on top of mine.
Geonna whispered just low enough that the driver couldn't hear us: Thanks so much for this.
I just smiled as so many worries fell away.
We didn't talk much during our dinner, but what we said was deep and important.

After dinner, I told her I had a suprise. She followed me outside.
Tresing: Wait...
Geonna: Hmm?


I lead her to a secluded lake that I had found while wondering with Jesus.
Geonna: Oh Tresing, It's...beautiful!



Tresing: I have one more thing.
Geonna: I can't wait.




Geonna: Thank You! I never, ever could have dreamed of anything like this!
Tresing: Let's go back to the restuarant.
Geonna: Ok.







When we got home I was the happiest man alive.  I couldn't believe how well the date went!
???: Oh Good! You're home!
Geonna: Is that your old wife?

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