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Monday, May 2, 2011

Chapter 15


Well Good Morning Sleepy head
Tresing: What time is it
I don't know.  Geonna's been up for like an hour though
Tresing: What!?
Yep.  You're in troooooubleeee! : D
Geonna: Oh Good You're up.  I just took a brisk jog and then started on the housework.  I just cleaned out Jesus's potty chair.  Here, can you throw it away?
Told ya!
Onto another subject, Jesus is using the toilet all by himself! Wooo!
Jesus: Thank you everyone, but this is a private moment, but don't worry I'll be signing autographs after the show.  Look for me in the comments section...
Uh-huh. You're turning into Geonna.

Of course he's way too cute to harbor any bad feelings against him.
 
So Tresing decided to go to the gym.  As you can see he's finding it real easy.
Tresing: Right *huff* Peace *puff* of *huff* cake *puff
And he huffed and he puffed and he...
Tresing: I think I strained something
Greaaat!
Which left Geonna in charge.  So of course she smothered Jesus
Not that he praticulary minded.
*Gasp* She's making real food. Not quick meals! Not baby food!
Geonna: Hey! I can cook!
Actually you can't.  That's why you are making sandwiches.  We don't want you to burn the house down.
I see you have great faith in me
; D
When Tresing came home it was very late...VERY LATE...
Tresing: Give it a rest!
Anyway, he was very tired and he went straght to bed.
In the morning Tresing found a note from Geonna. "Donna called last night. Said she found something really urgent. Said to come over right away in the morning. <3 Geonna"

Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Quick Message

Hi everyone! I know this isn't a chapter.  You see after last chapter everything kinda revolutionized, so I wasn't sure what to do next.  I eventually decided to add a twist I didn't even see coming. I hope you don't mind the wait!

Thursday, March 17, 2011

Chapter 14

That night, Geonna was woken up by...
Jesus: WAHHHHH!! I'm starving!
Geonna ran in,
Geonna: There, there...We forgot to feed you!
Jesus: Uh huh
Jesus: Thank you, Aunty Geonna.
By the the way before this...
Do you have to do that!! He's starving!
Geonna: Yes! Of Course! This is very important!
How many of you viewers has not made their bed and survived...exactly!

Shortly after Geonna went back to bed, Tresing woke up screming. Sheesh. You'd expect he'd have more control.

So he proceded to finish Geonna's work
Then he went and grabbed a snack
Eventually, Geonna re-awoke
Tresing: Why'd you think Donna was Cindy?
Geonna: I guess I was thinking about her...
Tresing: What?
Geonna: I was so worried! I mean, you had already dated, gotten married, had kids! Well, one kid. The point is, I haven't dated since high school!  I thought I wasn't going to live up to your past experiances!
Tresing: I wish I could hold onto you forever!
Jesus: Daddy! I wanna get up!
Tresing: Unfortunatly I don't think that's possible...

So There I leave you...Hopefully when I next see you all again the chapter will be longer and will be a cliffhanger.  Unfortunatly, I ran out of photos and have to take more. See you later!

Thursday, March 10, 2011

Chapter 13

Before we start I want to say I'm sorry it took so long...I had this big report to turn in. I'd like to thank all those who commented. I just found out that I have to verify your comments so they should actually start showing up now! ;)
This Chapter will be told from Tresing's point of view.
Geonna: Is that your old wife?
I shook my head.  I wasn't lying. My old wife had no idea where I was. Anyway this woman was so unlike Cindy.  Her name is Donna, and she livea in this nice house across town...what was she doing here?
Tresing: Hi Donna.
Donna: Hi Tresing. And you must be Geonna... 
Geonna: Pleased to meet you.
Tresing: What are you doing here?
Donna: Your neighbor called me up.  They knew I had met you, when you first came. Anyway, they said Jesus was screaming his head off.  I ran inside, your door was unlocked by the way, and there she was scaring the poor boy with a flashlight.  She would shine it up to her face, turn the rest of the lights off and tell Jesus stories he was way too young for!  I sent her away and didn't even pay her.  Then I fed poor Jesus and convinced him that everyone of those stories weren't real..
Tresing: Here have the babysitter's pay.  Thank you so much!
Geonna: Poor Jesus...We won't ever call her again!
Donna: I should think not. But since this is over, I would really like to talk to Geonna, if Tresing wants to see Jesus.
I ran inside. I didn't even care  what those girls were going to talk about.
Tresing: Jesus!
Jesus Daddy!
Tresing: I'm so sorry I didn't relize she was such a monster!
I played with him all day. He told me that the babysitter didn't feed him, or play with, or even put him to bed.  He said that Donna was like "a soupa haro" because she "saved da day"
Donna decided to stay the night so I had to sleep in Geonna's bed. Not that I really cared
Not one bit. ;D
I still wanted to know why she thought Donna was Cindy...

Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Chapter 12

This chapter will be told from Tresing's Point of View
I'm sorry the last chapter was so short.  I hope this chapter is much longer!  Also please vote on the poll!
In the last chapter, Tresing realized he was late for his date.
Ok, now for the story to start:
I couldn't believe I was late!
I could!
Shhh  I changed into my suit and slacks, and rushed out door.
I found her in the park and I saw her before she saw me.
Boy, she is pretty. 
I walked up her. Relax, I told myself. I loosened up. Smiled. Geonna visibly relaxed, too.  Good, good.  Just...just be normal.  Say hi, then tell her what's going on...but not ALL of it, at least not yet.
Tresing: You look great!
Geonna: You look nice, too.
Tresing: Um...hello...So I have a few things planned...but first dinner?
Geonna: I'm at your leisure.
We were sitting in the taxi, and Geonna put her hand on top of mine.
Geonna whispered just low enough that the driver couldn't hear us: Thanks so much for this.
I just smiled as so many worries fell away.
We didn't talk much during our dinner, but what we said was deep and important.

After dinner, I told her I had a suprise. She followed me outside.
Tresing: Wait...
Geonna: Hmm?


I lead her to a secluded lake that I had found while wondering with Jesus.
Geonna: Oh Tresing, It's...beautiful!



Tresing: I have one more thing.
Geonna: I can't wait.




Geonna: Thank You! I never, ever could have dreamed of anything like this!
Tresing: Let's go back to the restuarant.
Geonna: Ok.







When we got home I was the happiest man alive.  I couldn't believe how well the date went!
???: Oh Good! You're home!
Geonna: Is that your old wife?